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    dots Submission Name: My Lovedots
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    Author: Fernando Corto
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 23/24/23
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 657
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       My love...


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    dotsMy Lovedots
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    Who is she
    Where has she been
    Is she in front of me
    Or is she hiding

    She’s the one
    The one I call to
    I say ‘My Love’
    And I still wonder who

    Is she real
    Is she an illusion
    I wish she’s with me
    To end my confusion

    She’s in my world
    She’s in my heart
    She makes my world
    Fall apart

    My love is with me
    She’s inside my soul
    She completes me
    And makes me whole

    She is my company
    She is delicate like a dove
    She is my beloved
    She is My Love.




    Submitted on 2006-12-15 15:27:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I hope she feels that way though.
    | Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by Fernando Corto | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm so happy you were able to feel that for someone. great for you. and i mean that witout sarcasm.
    | Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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