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Author: gloomyanddoomy
ASL Info:    17,female
Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81 /426 /527
Words: 69
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 718
Average Vote:    2.5000
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anonymous is mysterious
anonymous is not here
here is were i am
No one nose anonymous real name
anonymous is athlitic
anonymous is perfect
for he has no flaws
he lives life by the day
anonymous is hidin from the dark
anonymous brighten up my day
I dont see anonymous alot
anonymous is different than
anyone else i have ever met
i think im in love with anonymous

Submitted on 2006-12-15 15:32:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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