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    dots Submission Name: attic memories- reviseddots
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    Author: atonement
    Elite Ratio:    2.71 - 106/186/98
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsattic memories- reviseddots
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    I walk through these catacombs,
    of dust glazed memories.
    Running fingers over
    tiny dead trinkets

    Numb,
    I walk on shatterd beauty,
    and last second hopes.

    These artifical sunrays,
    illuminate the dust,
    and choke my every breath.

    I sit on the worn planks
    of cedar wood,
    drawing faith in debris,
    and caressing thoughts.
    Of past until now
    unknown...

    these music boxes
    open without a sound,
    and their ballerinas lay
    bent and broken.
    They will never dance again.

    I lay with them,
    remembering
    everything.









    Submitted on 2006-12-15 19:49:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Lovely and delicately done ... mildy arcane and wonderfully mysterious ... everything works very well ... the poem could, concievably, be referring to almost any thing ... pretty good word choice over all and a nice, very nice dream llike atmosphere you have attained here which fits so very well with the poem ... bravo ... bravo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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