lol..did you mean breathe in or out...????sorry.... this is a great piece...captures the confusion well.... i like the thought "instill in me the truth of life" being asked of an unknown...who to ask? "only the weakest shall die" and yet the meek inherit the earth? (i don't subscribe to this belief, yet your line seems to be at odds with it, attacking) almost a call to action....excellent write...
This is a good write, you've put your views down very well and although I don't have answers for the questions that are raised, I will search for them with you. Thanks for sharing.
i really enjoyed reading the poem. to me the question that should be asked every now and then has been asked again and i indeed loved the presentation.
Submission Name: What i feel about existence
