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    dots Submission Name: People Changedots
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    Author: elseibi
    ASL Info:    20/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228/180/38
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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       Meh, dont ask, i just needed somwhere to rant incoherently.

    seriously lol you can just ignore this - i was having an off day and needed a rant hehe. much love xx


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    dotsPeople Changedots
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    Isnt it funny how people change,
    you think you know them,
    then one day you realise,
    times have changed,
    you're not best friends any more.

    Isnt it funny how people change... how can you laugh at that ???

    You think you know them... or maybe you trust too easily.

    Then one day you realise... You tried to ignore it before or maby you were just too stupid to notice.

    Times have changed... True personalities are showing through.

    You're not best friends any more... You've gotta stop pretending that people dont grow up, ad grow apart.




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      great way of statin the truth of what really happens
    | Posted on 2009-06-17 00:00:00 | by sparkleshine | [ Reply to This ]
      Man, I feel like a jerk. I honestly didn't mean to come off that way, but going back and reading my comment...I shouldn't have phrased things quite that way. I'm sorry. It seems like I'm in need of a good rant myself. Maybe I'll write a song...

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2007-01-14 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      How true this write is. I was just in my best friends wedding last weekend and these very same thoughts were running through my head. This was very well written and very personal. Thanks for letting us read it.
    | Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice write its ok I guess I can say I can relate to you one this one, ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-25 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      Check your spelling. "Maby" is spelled MAYBE, at least the way you're using it.

    And regardless of your plan to "pointlessly" rant, I know exactly how this feels. My best friend fell into the wrong crowd--heavy metal anarchist pulling stupid pranks and cussing every other word bad crowd. I can handle heavy metal and being against our current state of government--I happen to LIKE rock, and I can't stand politicians--but when the "friends" he made led him to the point that he attempted suicide and then blamed him for the trouble they'd caused--sometimes, I am amazingly ticked off. He's still alive, but he's done enough that I'm not sure I will ever trust him again--which is depressing, since he's the only real friend I've got.

    I hope your story's not quite so depressing--but here's hoping you feel better, anyway.

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2006-12-19 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      we change. they change. it's sad really and it hurts when you feel like you're being left out because one of you're closest friends is growing in the opposite direction of you. but that's life and we all have to move on i guess. nevertheless, it's sad and we just have to deal
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
      this here...is tru....reminds me of some of my old "friends".... lol
    -alexis HAPPY HOLIDAYSSSS!!!
    | Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      There's a saying by the wise men that "the only thing that is constant is change"!! Not only do "they" change, but, never forget, we change also! Nice thing is, sometimes the change brings us closer together; but, alas, sometimes it also takes others farther apart!

    This is a thoughtful and contemplative write, and lets the reader see your mood as well as your thoughts! Happy holidays!
    | Posted on 2006-12-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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