You stopped by and didn't even say hi? Anyway alas I can comment.
Seal me in
I knew you built a fort out of blankets i used to do that when I was little.
Who is the muse your on? are they covered in charcoal?
Wandering the elements sniffing pinecones in search of pignolias
I want pants made out of moss will you make me some
You can mail it with youre envwloped youth. Mmm ahesive glue.
Seriously the meaning is obvious if given any thought. I like this better than anything I've read from you in a while. Are your skies still azure?Ours are blank and everything is blanketed in snow.
This has some interesting images, but your errors really mar this. For example, I think for "elemental wander," you probably meant "elemental wonder." I think you meant "sensation" and "envelop" too. I think the run-together words work well, but I'm not sure you need the ellipsis. ("Dust, cover me" works just as well to me because ellipses are abused so much that even when one would work, I think it's better omitted). I also think you need to put in some omitted words; for instance, in "impossible to stay clean on this muse," I think you should add an "it's."