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    dots Submission Name: More Than Wordsdots

    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsMore Than Wordsdots

    What I say maybe cheesy.
    But believe me itís not easy.
    To describe your heavenly grace.
    Or the peacefulness of your face.
    I find it hard to speak my mind.
    Sometimes the words are hard to find.
    My emotions are so intense.
    It overwhelms my intelligence.
    Blankness in my mind blooms.
    When I get a weft of your perfume.
    I stutter around you, girl
    I see you and my innards whirl.
    I sweat from my skin.
    And become confused within.
    You curl up my toes.
    And redden my cheeks and nose.
    I think of you in every degree.
    And hold deep within me your beauty.
    Near me you stand
    Clammy are my hands.
    In my mind flowers so sweet.
    Make it so the ground never touch your feet.
    These feelings I do not force.
    I just let Love run itís course.
    Iím no nerd or stud Iím somewhere in between.
    I think your getting what I mean.
    I can give you blissful affection.
    And knightly protection.
    Iíll try my hardest.
    Iím not merely an artist
    I know you think this is all absurd.
    But I am more than just words

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