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    dots Submission Name: when tough little boys grow up to be dadsdots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 282
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswhen tough little boys grow up to be dadsdots
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    Well he never once
    Backed down from a punch
    Well he'd take it square on the chin
    Well he found out fast
    A bully's just that
    You've got to stand up to him
    So he didn't cry when he got a black eye
    As bad as it hurt, he just grinned
    But when tough little boys grow up to be dads
    They turn into big babies again.

    Scared him to death
    When you took your first steps
    And he'd fall everytime you fell down
    Your first day of school, he cried like a fool
    And he followed your school bus to town
    Well he didn't cry, when Old Yeller died
    At least not in front of his friends
    But when tough little boys grow up to be dads
    They turn into big babies again

    Well he's a grown man
    And as strong as he is
    Sometimes its hard to believe
    That one little girl, with little blonde curls
    Could totally terrify him
    If you were to ask
    his wife would just laugh
    She'd say "I know all about men
    How when tough little boys
    grow up to be dads
    They turn into big babies again"

    Well he knows one day, he'll give you away
    And he's gonna stand there and smile
    And when he gets home, and he's all alone
    Well, he'll sit in your room for a while
    Well he didn't cry when Old Yeller died
    At least not in front of his friends
    But when tough little boys grow up to be dads
    They turn into big babies again
    When tough little boys grow up to be dads
    They turn into big babies again.




    Submitted on 2006-12-17 11:55:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      y does this sound like a country song? i think i've heard one like it before, but i'm not a big country music fan myself.
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]
      y does this sound like a country song? i think i've heard one like it before, but i'm not a big country music fan myself.
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]
      y does this sound like a country song? i think i've heard one like it before, but i'm not a big country music fan myself.
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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