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    dots Submission Name: And We Play Our Pianodots
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    Author: rocker5871
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 191/147/90
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsAnd We Play Our Pianodots
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    I turn up the volume on my amp
    And let the chords progress
    And even though my own isn’t a grand
    It relieves the same amount of stress

    Stillness engulfs me
    And I all I know
    Is the beating of my heart
    First, fast then slow

    Keeping time with the tempo
    My fingers begin to fly
    And then play lento
    With every chord I imply

    Crescendos pounding
    Fingers slamming the keys
    The restlessness of my hands
    Makes my entire body ease

    Flowing with the melody
    I never stop playing
    Not until day’s end
    Just going without delaying

    When I come to a rest
    Before I take the music down
    I notice something
    There’s a certain presence all around

    I think someone’s watching
    Someone waiting
    And they are there
    Listening to me annotating

    To scared to move
    I continure to play
    Hoping I’ll forget
    Wishing the music to take me away

    “Do not be afraid” says a familiar voice.
    The one I hear every day
    The one that makes the weekends move slow
    The one I can’t stand to hear slip away.

    You sit beside me
    And we play...
    Our piano




    Submitted on 2006-12-17 15:20:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Woo! I luved it! lol it's a really nice, I liked the :

    -“Do not be afraid” says a familiar voice.
    The one I hear every day
    The one that makes the weekends move slow
    The one I can’t stand to hear slip away.-

    part!

    -alexis
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]


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