Description: Just an exercise. I thought about trying to write an 'emo' poem, and then decided it'd be cool to use words that started with 'emo'. How did I do?
EMO -------------------------------------------
I'm feeling emotional,
Honest and true.
I need emollition
For my sins.
I've found emoticons
Can't express me.
I've seen emotive
Words on a page.
Now I'll try emotion,
Without smilies or stars.
But no emolument
Is forthcoming.
hahahahaha. i read it because of the title and this was really creative! but when I read it, it didn't feel right for some reason...it just feels like some of your sentences just cut off (ha, not a pun, I promise).
"I've seen emotive
Words on a page."
It's like...ok...is that all? its like you're just trying to find "emo-" words to fill into the poem.
well good try, the whole thing is sort of a try, with the poetry and the subject of it. i dont really see where sins fit into this, the rest of it seems to have you seated in front of the glowing screen. this could be a really good thing though if you keep working on it and find more words! good luck
Submission Name: EMO
