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    dots Submission Name: Forgetting what its like.dots
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    Author: Akai_Ame
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 223/180/46
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       The man i love very much had started talking to me about a month ago. He told me that he was sorry for everything and that he still loved me and wanted me to take him back. However i am with someone else and love him as well. Problem solved... The day after my Ex told me he wanted me to take him back... He went back to dating/fucking my younger cuz. The reason we broke up to begin with.

    Now i don't know what i want anymore....
    I'm so lost...


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    I thought that i was safe.
    Thought that i was done with all the pain.
    But then you came back again.
    You reminded me what it was like,
    To hear the sound of your laugh,
    To hear you say you love me,
    And all i wanted was for it to last.
    Too bad for me, i was a fool.
    This whole time i was the truthful one.
    Not you.

    I'm held by another, this is true.
    However,when i said i still love you i meant it.
    And yes, I do love him too.
    But there will always be a place within my heart for you.

    I no longer know what my heart wants.
    Part of it says you can be what you once were.
    But you've ripped in apart more than once.
    The other says to stay with who has worked so hard to repair it.

    I was going to go back, As stupid as it was.
    I missed you so much.
    You told me you wanted me to take you back.
    Told me you regretted everything
    Yet here you are with her again.
    A member of my very own kin.

    Guess it is for the best.
    I'd be only in pain.
    So i might as well put this love to rest.
    Besides I'm happy with who I'm with.

    .....Aren't i?.....




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      A very tough decission and a truely sticky situation. i have not yet lived enough years to truely comprehend how you feel. Your words paint a very vivid picture tho and it almost hurts me to read them. Give it time. Pray about it. God helps all those who are willing to receive his help. Though i walk through the valley of the shadow of death, i will fear no evil, for you are with me, thy rod and thy staff, they comfort me. God bless yo uand your writing

    ~Josh
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by cupajoe0 | [ Reply to This ]



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