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    dots Submission Name: Mistdots
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    Author: the_truth
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 25/21/21
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 148
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 840



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    Mist

    A swirling veil of gray deceit
    Obscures the world from sight,
    The line where truth and falsehood meet,
    Masking both shadow and light.
    The cloudy mist, the gray illusion
    Covering the sky,
    The cool, dark fog of forced confusion
    Is nothing but a lie.
    Like the way you hide in ignorance
    And insist there's nothing wrong,
    Though through the mist of innocence
    Hatred will reign here all along.
    Like the smile I always feign
    To disguise my own despair,
    A mask to cover up the pain
    Which I alone know to be there.
    Like the door that hides me when I cry
    With sorrow never-ending
    With silenced screams for a clear sky,
    But the world goes on pretending.







    Submitted on 2006-12-18 15:47:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This too, is a fine, fine poem, extremely good though not quite so good as your superb "Snowfall" poem ... but this poem has much to recommend it ... good rhyme ... heartfelt emotion ... I liked it muchly ... bravo ... bravo ... Michael
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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