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Another Love Poem

Author: sravenlyn
ASL Info:    17/f/NJ
Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 21 /58 /67
Words: 130
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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jus another love poem... to my husband Curtis

Another Love Poem

I want to thank you
For simply being who you are
For showing me love thats true
for being the light behind my star

I want to kiss your lips
Only because they belong to your face
I love the way you grasp my hips
And how you seem to love my taste :-P

I want to touch your soul
Since thats closest to your heart
And wanting to be closer to you is my goal
From one devil to another your a work of art

I love you with every part of me
I hope you feel the same
My love for you is clear to see
Our love is so rare that it could win instant fame

Submitted on 2006-12-18 16:06:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  awww. thats so sweet. :) made me happy.

wait. ur husband?!?! at 15...
| Posted on 2006-12-19 00:00:00 | by blankscreen | [ Reply to This ]

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