Another Love Poem

Author: sravenlyn ASL Info:    17/f/NJ Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 21 /58 /67 Words: 130

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Another Love Poem

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I want to thank you For simply being who you are For showing me love thats true for being the light behind my star I want to kiss your lips Only because they belong to your face I love the way you grasp my hips And how you seem to love my taste :-P I want to touch your soul Since thats closest to your heart And wanting to be closer to you is my goal From one devil to another your a work of art I love you with every part of me I hope you feel the same My love for you is clear to see Our love is so rare that it could win instant fame

Submitted on 2006-12-18 16:06:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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awww. thats so sweet. :) made me happy. wait. ur husband?!?! at 15...

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