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Dont Judge Me

Author: TeeTee
ASL Info:    15/f/georgia
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Words: 243
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Words can hurt and some can not.

Dont Judge Me

Have you ever heard the saying
"Sticks and stones may break my bones,
but words can not hurt me."
In a way I disagree
And in a way I agree

Disagree: Sticks buise and cut
And so does stones.
But words,...
They hurt in many ways; but it depends on what you say.
Some words to me; may not mean the same as they mean to you.
You may not have been through all the things that I have been through.
And may not ever go through it.

Some days I may be in a bad mood.
And one of those days you may be rude.
This poem is understandable
And for some you have no clue.

Agree: Sticks buise and cut
And so does stones
But words,.....
They cannot hurt me.
If you dont know me
Then don't judge me.
There are a thousand names that you can call me.
And a lot that of words that can hurt me.
But I say to you
Please do not judge me.

Submitted on 2006-12-18 17:27:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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