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If you knew the Real Me

Author: darkwiccan14
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about how ppl r stupid and need to just stop. & about how stupid they are when they think they know me, lol

If you knew the Real Me

I'm not just a pretty face,
I also have feelings,
and I don't often embrace,
with just anyone you see,
I'm just like you,
and your just like me.

You don't know the real me,
SO how could you even see,
Or say that you know me?
You don't know the real me,
I'm as tough as I can be,
And if you knew me,
Then you'd know my favourite letter,
is Z.

I'm not as thin as the other girls,
But i'm gradually making my way there,
No, not but doing the "old Hurl,"
I don't care for how I have done my hair,
All I want is you and I won't share.

But if you knew the real me,
you'd have me,
but you don't know or have neither,
So all I can say and let you see,
is that,
If you want me come and get me,
and then I'll be calm and know that I
don't have a deciever.

Submitted on 2006-12-18 17:42:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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