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    dots Submission Name: Child Blessdots
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    Author: Squall Leon Hea
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 104/79/29
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsChild Blessdots
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    Bless the Child
    Wants to Grow old

    Bless the heart
    and love ten fold

    Nice sweet face
    full of love and brace

    That is how
    and blessed child raise

    Clueless about the world
    that is what the child was told

    warm heart , soft hands
    and eyes with the shine of gold

    Night , Night
    My dear child bless

    Sleep tight
    and worryless.




    Submitted on 2006-12-19 03:56:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW... i liked it! I pictured a little child being tucked into bed, not worrying about what tommorrow may bring... just living in a dream life we all wish we could return to.

    ~MaGgIe
    great write.

    PEACE
    | Posted on 2007-07-29 00:00:00 | by Magger32 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really loved this poem. You know, I clicked on your poem b/c I saw that it was by "Squall Leon Hea" and being the total FF geek that I am, I just went hmmmm... what is this all about? And I found this poem! Weird, right? I know, I know... Well, I really liked the poem... If only I could be a little kid again...

    Keep up the good work and keep writing!
    *~ Mist ~*
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by PrincessDoom13 | [ Reply to This ]
      When I think , bless (insert someone here) I think of the southern way of being honest without being offensive. Ex: Bless her heart, she's as big as a house. In the beginning of this poem," Bless the Child
    Wants to Grow old" it seems the meaning of Bless them is the same. Like, bless the poor child, they do not know better. They cannot appreciate their youth because they are young.
    | Posted on 2007-02-01 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Well itís true...the only ones who are worriless are children cause they havenít been out in the real world and they're blessed for that. But sooner or later they will have to face life, so they should enjoy their care free life as kids because it will be over!
    Good write.Keep it up
    | Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]


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