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    dots Submission Name: why is love so hard to finddots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotswhy is love so hard to finddots
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    Everyday,
    I look around
    Seems that no one's ever satisfied
    Could it be,
    that underneath
    We've all got something to hide

    From the moment we arrive
    We want to fill the space inside
    We all need to feel alive

    If it's love that keeps us breathin'
    Gives us something to believe in
    Is it fear that makes us blind?
    Tell me,
    why is love so hard to find?

    If we hear so much about it
    And we can't go on without it
    Let the mystery unwind
    Tell me,
    why is love so hard to find?

    All I know is when you find it
    Even earth can feel like you're in heaven
    Tell me now,
    unlock the secret
    Help us all to find the hidden treasure

    From the moment we arrive
    We want to fill the space inside
    We all need to feel alive




    Submitted on 2006-12-19 18:30:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a very good poem. i liked it alot, i know what you mean about everyone wanting love and not being able to find it and then you wonder why you even try at all. very good poem though, keep up the great work. joanna
    | Posted on 2006-12-19 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]


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