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    dots Submission Name: Love's Clawsdots
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    Author: Castalia
    ASL Info:    666/N/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 16/33/33
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 108
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    I’ve made myself a dreamer,
    Holding wishes and desires in my heart.

    Forgot logic and reason,
    Turned to magic and fantasy.

    Did you notice I fell in love?
    Ever since the moment I thought you cared.
    That cursed day…
    That I can’t take away from myself.

    Leave me with my heart out,
    Bleeding in my hands.
    Listening to the same sad songs,
    That remind me of you.

    I can understand,
    That you need time.
    Your fear left from love,
    Twice ago, broken and wronged.

    But this time it’ll be different.
    This time, you’ll be the one.
    To break me and my heart,
    To walk away.

    Tell me the truth,
    What you feel for me.

    Don’t give me a lie to live…
    If you’re not going to make it real.




    Submitted on 2006-12-19 20:34:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love can be a very scary state if it is only one-sided. I could read the pain in this poem and, maybe, even some fear of rejection. I liked the appearance of this poem with two opening couplets, four quatrains, and two closing couplets. Peggy Paris (Sharon)
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]



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