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Faith no more


Author: Kasper187
ASL Info:    24 m Texas
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Religious
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heavon is spelled wrong intentionally. Im not an atheist I believe in GOD, but just have questions for him...and all of the other believers out there. Life is a neverending question...


Faith no more



Let me tell u bout a guy who lost his faith
His heart was lost and searched for a way
Through the sorrows of this dark world of hate
A world full of anger and war and Faith no more

Life of ignorance is a life of bliss
Hate is so blind it kills like this
War after war we tread on
Until we reach the end Of so called Heavon

Life on earth
Dead from birth
Lost from inside
Answers the world hides
Maybe the aliens know
More about us
Than we can trust
Ask the sky for answers
Maybe it will answer back
Maybe the end will come
On top of wars back

What's this life for?
Away from the sun
The"Black hole sun"
Faith no more

Can the world end?
Vanish into nothingness
Where would our souls go?
To the emptiness of so called heaven?

Faith so lost
Love so gone
Lost what I sought
Along the way I run
Along this lonely road of broken dreams
So much fear inside of what I will become
When the End comes...




Submitted on 2006-12-19 22:25:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like this piece, i'm not sure i can say exactly why it's good but it was like i could understand it and felt pulled to it i guess would be the word, but i'm not sure if this sounds strange to you or not caus i'm not even sure i understand it myself but i did like this piece it was good. joanna
| Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]


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