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    dots Submission Name: I've Been Thinkindots
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    Author: kapri49
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 31/69/30
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 633
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 294



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       This is about this guy i'm totally crazy about...i donno why but I am lol


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    dotsI've Been Thinkindots
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    And I've Been Thinkin Lately
    You know how to catch my eye
    Oh boy you know it's hard
    When I'm near you I feel alive
    Body, mind, and soul
    But the way you look the way you act
    Your not my type
    So why can't I get you off my mind?




    Submitted on 2006-12-19 23:23:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      agree it's a good poem many can relate to it
    short.. dramatic.. messages lies between the lines..I enjoy reading it keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      Simple, though effectively conveys the private moment of contemplating someone new and interesting.

    Certainly no frills, but all the more honest for it. I think everyone can relate to this one. Well done.
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by biska | [ Reply to This ]


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