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    dots Submission Name: Thaluuzta; Scum of the Universe. Fyukiz & Ramdots
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    Author: parekura
    ASL Info:    26/M/Israel
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    dotsThaluuzta; Scum of the Universe. Fyukiz & Ramdots
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    Back on planet Earth all hell broke loose. As thousands of Thaluuztan drop-ships descended from Earth's orbit down to the surface of the planet, human gunners shot them, but only more appeared. A rain of metal and dead alien carcasses fell on the surface of the planet, bringing destruction with each impact. Squadrons of black devils appeared in the sky, flying high toward the ships, entering fierce battles. Humans fought well as Carton and Gangas had presumed.
    From the ruins, where the drop-ships fell, hundreds of hardened Thaluuztan survivors went out spreading like decease to every street and house around the ships, clawing ferociously flesh and metal for mere sadistic fun. Soon the National Guard came with heavy reinforcements and the army followed. Where humans stroke back, the aliens soon reappeared with new forces. It seems there is no hope for humanity this time…
    From a secured location, somewhere in the underground the President of Earth received new reports on the invasion.
    "We have yet succeeded in making any contact with the alien race. – One of the generals said. – I fear they have no intentions for granting us unconditional surrender."
    "They always have no intentions for granting unconditional surrender! This is the case with alien invading race! All they want is to destroy us. And why?! For fun, who knows?! Didn't you see the replay of the Independence Day last week on the classics channel?" The white haired President replied.
    "So, what are our suggestions?" Everyone in the room went silent.
    "As of now we still have positions here, here, and there. – One of the generals pointed on the map. – It seems that they have some trouble eating through our hardened forces, but every time we blast them, more of them appear from the impact." The president looked surprisingly at the general.
    "Did you say 'eating'?"
    "Yes, Mr. President. They eat through our forces… more like claw them and then eat."
    "What about our feral and Changed forces? Do you think they can help a bit?"
    "Some of the orbital platforms already sent their Changed troops into the battle. The problem is with pinpointing the right location for landing. In this report you can see what happened when a Goliath Changed landed – to say the least – on slightly changed location. Its impact smashed the troops guarding that post! 35 soldiers are dead by our hands!"
    After a long and serious thinking the president raised his eyes to everyone else in the room.
    "We have one last chance. Get me Hollywood."

    *

    Carton looked at the viewing screen with unleashed pride and happiness. The pictures show promising winning of Thaluuztan forces.
    "Let's open a bottle of Champagne to celebrate our victory!" He announced but Gangas turned back and went out without saying a word.
    'Throwing everything you got on a star is not a good planned strategy.' He cursed the arrogant overlord. Then, as he walked down the corridor, everything around him suddenly shifted and a distant voice coming closer smashed into him with immense force and then as suddenly as it appeared, everything turned back to normal.
    When Gangas came back to his senses, he found himself looking into a pair of eyes that looked back at him.
    "Did… have I met you before…?" He mumbled.
    "Yeah, you remember me. I crashed into your windowpane not long ago. You gave me a ride back to my home system." Gangas stared at the thing before him with amazement and then touched his soft skin.
    "You're a human…" He said.
    "Sure thing, at least that’s what everybody else tell me. And you are…?"
    "Gangas, a Limmnak consultant to Thaluuztan Universal Destruction Forces" The human looked back at him, confused.
    "Well, now I'm sure you're a human. I'm an advisor to the tall idiot alien you saw when you smashed on our windowpane. He is a Thaluuztan, and I am a Limmnak. These are two different races. Understand?" The human smiled in reply.
    "Sure." He said.
    "What are you doing here and how did you appear here?" Gangas felt curious than ever.
    "I don't really know, but I lost my friend Ram somewhere on your ship. So I came back here to take him back."
    "What is Ram?" The human smiled back at the little alien.
    "He’s not what, but who. He is a friend of mine. His name is Ram."
    "You mean there is another human here aboard the ship and we didn't notice?"
    "Yeah, and don't worry, it's quite hard to notice this guy. You know how much trouble he gives me back home? You don't want me to start! But… he's my best friend and I have to find him."
    "Amazing. – Gangas replied. – Once I shared feelings like you have. This 'Friend', before the Thaluuztans came to our world and destroyed it, I also had 'friends'."
    "So, you mean you don't like these aliens who are invading my planet?" The human asked.
    "Not at all! Especially this overlord, Carton is his name. In all my years and vast experience I have never met with such an arrogant idiot fool!"
    "Very interesting… - the human replied. – Perhaps you would like to help me end this invasion? And by the way, the name's Fyukiz."
    "A pleasure to meet you, human Fyukiz, – Gangas shook Fyukiz's hand. – I read about this greeting tradition on the internet. You can find amazing information on www.human_encyclopedia_tha.org!"

    *

    'You came!' Ram felt the sudden burst of energy pass nearby. He felt the presence of his lifetime friend on the ship.
    'There is still hope for us.' He turned away from the shadows and head through the maze of alien corridors to find his friend.

    *

    Hollywood; blocked by highest and most sophisticated protective technology was unaffected by the cruel battles that appeared now almost everywhere on the planet. While the invasion gave grim vision to human's future, the people of Hollywood lived their normal day to day life, unaware of the death beyond the protective golden shield.
    The red phone rang in the office of the television heroes Buzzskip and Doil. Buzzskip clicked on the 'send' button and the face of the president appeared on the viewing screen. The look on the president's face was grim and desperate.
    "Buzzskip! - The president cried into the phone. – We're being attacked by alien invasion that are unstoppable! The nation, the world needs your help! Please help!!!"
    "Calm down, Mr. President. – Buzzskip said with his ever calm voice. – Doil and I will take care of this problem in no time."
    "Thank you, Buzzskip. Thank you! And may God bless you!"
    "Yes, yes, you too, Mr. President." He turned back where his companion Doil stood and waited for his reply.
    "It seems that the Thaluuztans paid the visit to Earth after all… It is time for a small chat with overlord Carton…"




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