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    dots Submission Name: im sorry...and thank udots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       u know who u are if u read this....and i truly am sorry for all i did to u....


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    dotsim sorry...and thank udots
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    a new pain.....
    a new sorrow
    a new life
    a new confusion
    what does it mean?
    what does it signify?
    though I know in my past i have hurt and been hurt in kind
    I truly apologies to all those who know
    and all those who have yet to receive
    I once loved
    and that love felt true
    but my belief and my paranoia....fell threw
    and I became afraid
    for losing that love
    thatís were I made my mistake
    I lost her to another
    for my own paranoia made it seem
    that I would lose all dear to me
    so when that happened...
    I lied to myself and others
    saying things I only felt were true
    but in reality was only my paranoia saw true
    so to the one I loved
    forgive me for all that I did
    and I hope and pray to God
    that you can forgive
    I never deserved such a love as u gave me
    but I now thank you
    for the pain I received out of that paranoia has thought me
    that I can make anew what I have lost threw that
    thank you




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      This is a strong write that kind of describes the same situation I went through in life
    Unfortunately for 5 long years I was addicted to drugs and suddenly one day almost 2 years ago today the paranoia ended when I asked God into my Hert to help me move forward in life
    Right then and there I stopped doing drugs and I swear to you my Friend since that day I have been blessed with all the Positive energy I could ever want
    The Lords love saved my life
    I look forward to reading more writes from you in the future
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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