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    dots Submission Name: Decemberdots
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    Author: SouthernState
    ASL Info:    18/f/GA
    Elite Ratio:    4.77 - 31/21/16
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 96
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       Dedicated to Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore.


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    dotsDecemberdots
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    Spring is finished.
    Summer fades.
    Fall has died.
    Winter now takes center stage.
    This life is my December,
    This day that I lose you.
    I dress in dark to honor,
    Though you believed in color.
    Nothing was black and white
    While you breathed.
    Walls were broken,
    Sense was sharpened,
    Truth was made a fool.
    My eyes were open,
    My soul set free.
    Now I’m lost,
    Alone without you,
    And it seems like there
    Is one truth in this
    World of lies.
    Death.
    Cannot be conquered.
    Cannot be overcome.
    Death is here to stay.
    This is my December,
    This day that I lose you.
    I will cry for you
    But laugh to remember you.
    I will live your life
    And speak your words.
    There is no truth.
    There is no wall.
    There is no shame.
    This life is a December
    Death will set us free.




    Submitted on 2006-12-20 19:05:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Albus Dumbledore's middle name was BRIAN?

    ...

    Brian is the name of a dentist in B-Town who fathered the inspiration for 90% of what I write. He is some 5'10" in stature, imposing, brown-haired...and a dentist. Wow.

    melora
    | Posted on 2007-01-03 00:00:00 | by Melora | [ Reply to This ]
      wow very kewl stuff..... definitely i like... sorry for the loss. But really nice way to remember someone.... hopefully the next poem will not be on a loss.
    keep up the good stuff

    DaRaven
    | Posted on 2006-12-20 00:00:00 | by DaRaven | [ Reply to This ]



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