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    dots Submission Name: Duct Tape Fairytaildots
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    Author: Ratmeat
    ASL Info:    25/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 200/222/61
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1181



    Description:
       Ode to another crazy one


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    dotsDuct Tape Fairytaildots
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    A femalien gaze ganders for
    Spectacle ovations
    "Look at my nonexistent cum swallowing
    Machine lavishly draped in
    Sticky cobalt censorship"
    Opticaliterary illusions fuel the hand railcar
    Pumping monkeys in her brain
    Like 1920's black n' white toons

    She shoots a July 4th of indisposed
    Chemical balance
    From the flashing WARNING sign
    On her foreheads
    This is to insure a sexual interest from the
    Cybermonging potential husbands
    Of which she may vampirize

    Malice in wonderland
    Eat the mushrooms dear
    Not the bakers dozen o' diet pills

    A sweet female shattered by dwarfed cells
    Drowning in a cesspool of Oprahism
    Choking on the real side of the street
    Gasping for correction

    You won't feel the welt of my ruler babe
    You never stood a chance

    The hunt for Cinderella is a joke
    After all she's only paper and ink
    I'd rather hock the glass slipper
    For guitar strings and Vodka





    Submitted on 2006-12-21 00:53:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this made me laugh.. very interesting..definately unique.. cant rally say much about it other than it kept me reading.. i especially like the stanza
    'The hunt for Cinderella is a joke
    After all she's only paper and ink
    I'd rather hock the glass slipper
    For guitar strings and Vodka '
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by FadedSilence | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm surprised you remembered it. If that woulda happened to me it wouldve been lost.
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]



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