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    dots Submission Name: Forgoten Darknessdots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 185
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 654



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       You decide what you thnk its about, probably all of your guesses are right!


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    dotsForgoten Darknessdots
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    Traped in forgoten darkness.
    Stuck in eturnal flame.
    Substained for memories of you.

    Forgotten in this realm.
    That I call hell.
    Missing you.

    Lost in this eturnal pain.
    Caused by your action.
    Dreaming of only you.

    Traped in forgoten darkness.
    Stuck in eturnal flame.
    Substained for memories of you.

    Loveing you for the rest of eturnaty.
    Kissing you in my never ending dreams.
    Holding you throughout the night.

    That's the place I wish to be.
    Instead I'm traped.
    In eturnal flame.




    Submitted on 2006-12-21 08:13:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great work on this. It has alot of powere and i actully think that this could be applied to many situations which makes it so great! it has a great flow and use of imagery. I realy liked these lines;
    "Traped in forgoten darkness.
    Stuck in eturnal flame.
    Substained for memories of you."
    It had a lot of feeling and meaning to me! Awsome job keep it up!
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by FLHgg | [ Reply to This ]



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