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    dots Submission Name: Rely on medots
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    Author: Zakaria Glenza
    Elite Ratio:    0.84 - 3/6/65
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1841



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       Written in the Dark, but with Love from Zakaria Glenza to Hela Khaled


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    dotsRely on medots
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    I know where I am,
    From where I came,
    Where to go and to whom I want to give my name
    From a deep place,
    To your magic space,
    To a shared joy never lived by others from our race,

    How could I ever go there without you?
    …If my thoughts and dreams are only about you?

    I don’t want to hide,
    My stories and rides,
    Even if they don’t build my pride,
    Since I was given a second chance,
    A renaissance,
    When you made me live a real romance…

    How could I ever live it alone?
    …If my heart and soul are your own?

    If somebody treated you bad,
    When the truth you said,
    Be happy that he’s not sharing your bed…
    Know that I’m ready to endure,
    For your amour,
    To make you recover even if my death is your only cure…

    How could I ever laugh when I see you crying?
    When you know that for your joy I’m ready to die?

    Now wait!
    If you say that I’m great,
    Just know that I’m at your feet,
    I said at your feet,
    Just know that I’m here to serve you,
    This is what god deserved to you…
    And this will make me proud,
    And I’ll write it and say it loud,
    Because I love you,
    Yes I love you,
    I will see your need,
    I will forgive all what you did,
    I will fight for you,
    I will die for you,
    Hand in hand,
    Against the entire universe I would stand,
    To understand you,
    To defend you,
    I will be your father,
    I will be your brother,
    I will be the one, who claims your right,
    Doesn’t matter with whom you’d fight,
    I want to be better than "what you see",
    So help me, just rely on me…




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      dude im sorry i just love this poem its the best i added as my fav like along time ago,but i havent been on a while and i had to read it i just love this poem youre awesome for writing something i love
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by vlarrimore | [ Reply to This ]


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