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Butter Knife In Your Side


Author: giver_of_death
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Words: 342
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Ugh..Fucking mother


Butter Knife In Your Side



On the edge of tears every night
Why do you continue to fight
I don’t need this shit right now
Its pretty clear you don’t want me around
But every time I try to leave
You hold me down and make me feel your disease
I don’t want to cry anymore
Wiping my tears, my eyes are sore
Make up messed so many times
Continually wishing I could die
Yea I know I have people who care
But that doesn’t stop the stares .
Or the labels they place on me
I’m not just a piece of debris
I can dodge the rumours and the remarks
And maybe even try to get a new start
But as long as you keep putting me down
My smile shall remain as a frown
How can you think that I don’t care?
How can you think that I won’t be there
Even though the pain you cause is so true
I’m always going to be there for you
I want to help you help yourself
Don’t place your problems on the shelf
I don’t want to deal with this at all
Because I have other reasons for me to fall
Maybe my friends aren’t so stable
Maybe they’re hiding underneath the table
Of course I’m going to get them out
And offer advice without doubt
Sure, I feel so much pain I can’t bare
Nothing to this I can compare
My insides, rotten, pulled out and tied
I can’t remember how much I’ve cried
You yelling at me doesn’t help anyway
Only leaves me on the path to be a stray
Just let me help you abort this mess
And get us both out of stress
Sure I want to leave you alone
Let you solve it yourself and ache to the bone
But that’s not who I have come to be
And even if you disagree
Help you I will close the door
And my heartache I will ignore
Because when this is over and gone
I can finally, move safely on




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  For the people that want to help others I give a bow. Which seems to be you. I wish strength to you. However you can't let the matters of others bring you so far down that you have to frown. Kiss the world and let it know you will survive with a smile on your face. I love this writing it is very beautiful. The rhyming and sentence structure is very nice and seems to draw pictures in your mind. Seeping into your eyes and throughout your mind. Keep up the writing and I will keep up the reading. Good Luck. Blake!
| Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by deranged shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  This is good way to describe how I feel as well.
Vary good way to describe the disgrace this
world,can make us feel.Reminds me of a emotional relationship gone sour.I enjoyed the writting;dark romance.
| Posted on 2007-01-06 00:00:00 | by invader | [ Reply to This ]


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