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    dots Submission Name: Ears For Confidingdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 585
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    Description:
       My vision of a perfect friend.


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    dotsEars For Confidingdots
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    If I had an extra feature,
    It would be ears for confiding,
    Knowing that my life is insignificant,
    I can use and extra pair of ears,
    So they can hear my silent crying.

    My secrets will be kept secured,
    When I know it's flesh of my flesh,
    So when I can't find the cure,
    Releasing this stress of mine,
    Will never fail me,
    Regardless of the mess.

    I need a friend,
    Who knows the troubles that come,
    Someone who can understand,
    That this troubled life,
    Follows me everywhere,
    With no intentions to be gone.
    ....
    I need ears for confiding.




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