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    dots Submission Name: No more tearsdots
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    Author: Darklonelygirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 148/90/61
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 148
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1382



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       I hate feeling like this!


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    dotsNo more tearsdots
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    The tears, they fall unfettered and pure
    Pouring out pain that nothing can cure
    Tumbling, cascading like the waterfall
    The vivid mark of agony's call
    Those salty drops of feminine curse
    Trapped under weight, day by day growing worse
    No one to catch them, no one to see
    No one else lost in this hell-hole but me
    Screaming in terror at the walls, closing in
    Dropping to my knees; my head starts to spin
    Feeling the rage within growing strong
    What in the hell have I done that's so wrong?
    The quickness of breath and the tightness of chest
    I have endured through it all; gave it my best
    Fighting needlessly, years upon years
    Left in the clutches of multiple fears.
    Fears instilled with the greatest of care
    To cause me to snap; my soul to lay bare
    Stuck inside this glass house of mine
    I stare out at a world that could be just fine
    Sighing, i realize it will never be me
    Form this bondage I can't be set free
    Held tight in the grasp of anger and hate
    Painfully avoiding the view of my fate
    Hearing the heart in my breast tear once more
    I shudder to think of those who came before
    Pressing the steel to my flesh, I push with a shout
    I sit, no more tears, as my life just flows out.




    Submitted on 2006-12-21 23:26:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this poem is wonderful i think it is probably the best ive read since ive been on this site
    | Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by social circus | [ Reply to This ]
      really great poem jenny:)
    keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]
      really great poem jenny:)
    keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]
      i love your poem it was wonderful
    | Posted on 2006-12-24 00:00:00 | by bigdstraightg | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, great write...loved it.

    BUT it would be alot, alot eaiser to read if it was in a stanza form or something. It's kinda all put together, idk? lol just thought id be eaiser to read

    LOVED this tho!

    -----haley-----
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by haley_ima-mess_ | [ Reply to This ]
      It was good,but I was alittle confusd about it.but overall this is a good piece.Grrrreat job!^.^
    | Posted on 2006-12-21 00:00:00 | by Pochama | [ Reply to This ]
      You know these are the poems that just bring me joy reading them. ive always loved this teenage kinda dark poetry write, i fully feel you.
    I think its just clearly beautiful! reminds me of myself and the sense of left reality. Lovin the way the darkness surrounds me while I swallow every empathy from your words.

    keep writing, it helps relieve the pain on paper when your left alone. reality is your not alone.

    believe it! -take care
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]



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