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    dots Submission Name: alonedots
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    Author: eowyn
    ASL Info:    18/f/australia
    Elite Ratio:    5.47 - 227/153/76
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 207
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       a rewrite from an old deleted post. i think it has become a lot more powerful.
    it is about the despair i felt when unable to sucesfuly comit suicide.


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    dotsalonedots
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    The cool calm darkness.
    Chaotic burning light.
    Beacon just on the horizon
    almost Attainable.
    Arms open to it, pleading.
    Screams of desire
    in the late hours of the night
    for Them to visit.
    Calls go lost, unanswered.
    Left alone
    because Death will not come.




    Submitted on 2006-12-22 05:38:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey

    Not quite sure what you mean by sispear?? I can't even attempt to assume, since i have no idea what you must feel like at that point in time. Will get back...
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by K | [ Reply to This ]



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