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    dots Submission Name: you told me you were going to leave herdots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1661



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    Baby i know when we started out
    there were things you didn't
    know, but babyboy
    we got a lotta things we
    Need to discuss i know
    i'm asking for alot,
    but just trust. you
    say that things gettin old sneakin'
    Round creepin' and love on the low but babyboy i can't wait
    till' it's officially us, i can't wait to
    Let them know about us.
    First i tought that i could take you boy
    but i don't know, you
    told me you were gonna leave
    her for me
    Long ago.
    So please don't say you wanna give up.
    How do you tell her that i'm fallen in love,
    And i know your
    waiting paciently for that day,
    When we no longer
    have to lie about us.
    When i walk around
    all i want is your touch,
    And when you call me
    i don't wanna hang up,
    And i know i say
    it often but i can't wait
    Till' we no longer have
    to lie about us.

    Baby the situation
    don't seem fair to us both.
    But babyboy, she's an issue
    that i'm bout to adjust.
    Don't mistake our love
    is ment for just us,
    You are my soul, mind, body, spirit
    all that i know.
    But babyboy i can't wait till' it's officially us,
    i can't
    Wait to tell the world about us.

    First i tought that i could take you boy
    but i don't know, you
    told you were gonna
    leave her for me long ago.





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