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    dots Submission Name: Killy Killydots
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    Author: FreeBird
    ASL Info:    16/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 32/34/25
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 568
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    Bytes: 152



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       This was a waste of time. I was bored.


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    dotsKilly Killydots
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    Watch me cut
    Watch me rip
    Watch me tear your life apart
    Watch me stab
    Watch me slice
    Watch me kill your f***ing heart




    Submitted on 2006-12-22 11:15:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh kay. wow great rant
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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