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    dots Submission Name: random composuredots
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    Author: Roula
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46/64/45
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsrandom composuredots
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    composure of avoidance
    perplexing thoughts
    inudating silence
    and all is lost

    crowd the mother
    and fall the distance
    powder the lies and smile
    forget the sin of defeat
    and of sugar coated pain

    box the feelings
    open your heart
    and discover

    a state of being




    Submitted on 2006-12-22 14:41:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like the title of the poem, and the poem itself too, but the title makes it so much more rewarding to read. great job
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this. The words jumped right off the screen. I like that.


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    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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