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random composure


Author: Roula
ASL Info:    18/female
Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 46 /64 /45
Words: 48
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Description:




random composure



composure of avoidance
perplexing thoughts
inudating silence
and all is lost

crowd the mother
and fall the distance
powder the lies and smile
forget the sin of defeat
and of sugar coated pain

box the feelings
open your heart
and discover

a state of being




Submitted on 2006-12-22 14:41:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like the title of the poem, and the poem itself too, but the title makes it so much more rewarding to read. great job
| Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this. The words jumped right off the screen. I like that.


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| Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by EbonyBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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