Description: To love...To die...A heart that is broken...
Heartache And Romance -------------------------------------------
Can you hear the shattering sound of heartache?
That echoes off the hotel room walls
Can you see the despair burning in these eyes?
Vacantly gazing out towards the sky
And I'll tip my hat to romance
Such a beautiful thing it should have been
To be cuddled next to you at night
But instead you left me all alone
Take a picture of this heart
Watch as a thousand words of sorrow pour out
Why don't you come around here anymore?
I feel so lonely without seeing your face
But I'll catch such a pretty view of this town
As I fall several stories to the ground
So I'll spend my last days alone
Like a hermit trapped inside a shell
And I'll scream to end the silence
Before I board this train to Hell
So unoriginal this death may seem
As I tear out this heart inside of me
Scarred and deformed without you it may be
Yet it still continues to want to beat
Take a picture of this heart
Watch as a thousand words of sorrow pour out
Why don't you come around here anymore?
I feel so lonely without seeing your face
But I'll catch such a pretty view of this town
As I fall several stories to the ground
Wow this poem is bitter-sweet. I like how you intwined the two concepts.
"So unoriginal this death may seem As I tear out this heart inside of me Scarred and deformed without you it may be Yet it still continues to want to beat"
That really caught my eye. I can picture a broken and bruised heart fighting to beat. I really like this poem!
This poem caught my eye by title. I usually see romance along with heartache. It's not the best way of looking at it, but you can't deside anothers feelings. You've got a pretty good skeem going on in this poem form. I love this verse:Why don't you come around here anymore? I feel so lonely without seeing your face But I'll catch such a pretty view of this town As I fall several stories to the ground It's strange, but beautifully sweet at the same time. I really enjoyed the wicked romance of this. Keep on Keepin on! Dominique
Submission Name: Heartache And Romance
