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    dots Submission Name: Trigger Of Faithdots
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    Author: Gbaby36
    ASL Info:    18/Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 4/4/37
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 99
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1048



    Description:
       Thinking of the lines between Heaven and Hell
    As I sit atop the edge of existence
    And contemplate pulling this trigger of faith
    To find out if You truly exits in this place


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    dotsTrigger Of Faithdots
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    I'll spend all my days waiting for a second chance
    To take back all the regrets of my past
    Lately I've been so indifferent to the words You've spoken
    Though I know it would help just to listen

    Must I harden my heart just to sleep at night
    As I wallow and wail in my shame
    The sands of time keep on filling around me
    As I try to escape this void that I created

    The sun keeps on setting day after day
    As I trace back steps to the past
    The sin keeps on pushing at the limit
    And I just can't seem to break from this curse

    My faith seems to have ran dry
    And everyday feels like it should be the last
    I need to find some reason to remain here
    In this endless reverie that's consuming my soul

    Thinking of the lines between Heaven and Hell
    As I sit atop the edge of existence
    And contemplate pulling this trigger of faith
    To find out if You truly exits in this place




    Submitted on 2006-12-22 17:13:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow , ur a talented writer, welcome to elite skills , i like the title of this piece , trigger of faith, wow
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by Kasper187 | [ Reply to This ]



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