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    dots Submission Name: Between you and medots
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    Author: rikuprincess
    ASL Info:    17, Female
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/1
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 55
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1068



    Description:
       this is a poen about myself and a friend that I hope will, someday, open up to me when she feels like she can.


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    dotsBetween you and medots
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    Between you and me

    You and me
    So close, yet so far
    One of us invisible the other hurt inside
    One of us watching the other oblivious.

    You so hurt and alone
    Waiting for someone to trust
    But everyone who you trust
    You are betrayed by

    You clam up inside
    And don’t let anyone else in
    You’ve been hurt too much
    And won’t let yourself be hurt again.

    I look at you
    And even though you don’t show it
    I know you’re dying inside
    Which kills me as well

    The pain I feel
    Is as much as you do
    If you would open up to me
    I know I would never betray you

    But you open up to another
    Not me
    And that hurt me more
    Then the fact that I’ll never
    See the real you

    I try to be there for you whenever I can
    And just between you and me
    “I’ll be there for you no matter what
    And I will always and forever watch over you…”




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