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    dots Submission Name: ALLS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR..dots
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    Author: redeemer
    ASL Info:    19/female/venus
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 85/93/58
    Words: 383
    Class/Type: Rant/Love
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    dotsALLS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR..dots
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    IT SEEMS, ANYMORE, THAT LOOKING INTO HIS EYES, IS ALL IT TAKES
    IT MAKES ME BREAK DOWN, IT MAKES ME LOVE HIM
    IT MAKES ME WANT TO SPEND THE REST OF MY LIFE, ALONE, WITH HIM
    IT'S FUNNY, BECAUSE AT THE BEGINNING I WASN'T SURE IT WOULD LAST
    BUT LOVE'S JUST CRAZY LIKE THAT

    WATCHING HIM WALK, OR JUST LISTENING TO HIM TALK
    MAKES ME LOVE HIM SO MUCH MORE
    WITH EVERY SECOND RACING PAST
    CRAZY THAT I FEEL SO STRONGLY
    BUT THE GUILT THAT STAYS WHEN HE LEAVES, IS MORE THAN I CAN BARE SOMETIMES

    I WISH HE WOULD STAY, JUST A MINUTE MORE SOMETIMES
    SO MY GUILT WOULD LEAVE WITH HIM, WHEN HE WALKS OUT THE DOOR
    FUNNY THOUGH THAT THE LONGER HE'S AROUND
    THE LONGER THE PAIN I FEEL STAY'S FOR

    BUT HE'S WORTH THE HATE I FEEL TOWARDS MYSELF
    BECAUSE THE LOVE I HAVE FOR HIM OUTWEIGHS EVERYTHING
    THE WEIGHT OF THE GUILT ON MY CHEST IS REPLACED WITH THE WEIGHT OF OUR LOVE ON MY LIFE

    I LOVE HIM SO MUCH, ESPECIALLY WHEN HE TELLS ME THAT EVERYTHING IS OKAY
    WHY?
    BECAUSE I REALLY BELIEVE HIM
    I TRUST THAT HE KNOWS EXACTLY WHAT I WANT TO BELIEVE
    THAT I WILL BE FORGIVEN OF MY TRESPASSES BECAUSE TRUE LOVE IS WORTH EVEN THE ULTIMATE PRICE
    BECAUSE I WOULD DIE FOR HIM AND HE WOULD DIE FOR ME

    I WOULD RATHER SPEND ETERNITY IN PURGATORY
    THEN LIVE A DAY WITHOUT HIS LOVE
    SCARES ME TO THINK THAT EVERYONE I KNOW
    WOULD LIKE TO RIP US APART
    BUT IF LOVE TRULY CONQUERS ALL
    THEN WE WILL DEFEAT ALL OF THE ENEMIES OF OUR LOVE

    FUCK THEM IF THEY CAN'T SEE THAT HE MEANS EVERYTHING TO ME
    NO MATTER WHAT I HAVE FELT IN THE PAST TOWARDS HIM
    I KNOW WHAT I FEEL NOW AND THEY SHOULD RESPECT HOW I FEEL ABOUT HIM
    WHY SHOULD I LIVE ALONE AND COLD WITHOUT HIM
    JUST BECAUSE THEY ARE MISERABLE AND ALONE

    ALL'S FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR
    AND BABY WE ARE AT WAR
    WAR...
    WAR WITH THE WORLD
    BUT OUR LOVE WILL CONQUER ANYTHING THEY CAN THROW AT US
    I LOVE YOU BRADLEY
    AND I HOPE YOU ARE READY TO FIGHT FOR US
    BECAUSE I AM...KISSES...




    Submitted on 2006-12-22 21:13:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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