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    dots Submission Name: The Atheistdots
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    Author: Scribner
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 131/134/18
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Prose/Satire
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    dotsThe Atheistdots
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    An atheist dies.
    Once in Heaven, he is struck with wonder at all the beauty that surrounds him.
    Excited, he runs across the land. Over hills and through valleys.
    He drinks from the purest streams and rests on the softest grass.
    One day, on his travels, he meets God.
    He says. "Oh God. This place is so wonderful. Everything is so pure and beautiful."
    "Of course," God says. "This is Heaven. What did you expect?"
    The atheist replies. "Nothing."




    Submitted on 2004-01-30 00:49:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like that very much. i appreciate it greatly. . it shows a very good ideal on atheism.
    | Posted on 2004-02-29 00:00:00 | by silentpoison | [ Reply to This ]
      This is quite nice. Although I'm not sure that's exactly what the atheist will get, (I don't like hanging around people who don't like me, if you knwo whta i mean), but I quite enjoyed myself.
    | Posted on 2004-02-23 00:00:00 | by Niphredil | [ Reply to This ]


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