Dreams Turn Into Reality
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Dreams Turn Into Reality
Dreams evolve from mental visions To reality with life changing decesions From dreams of bring with you That suddenly somehow came true To a love that makes me smile That I can feel for a mile Evolving from lifeless to full of life Changing from girlfriend to wife Forming into a rose rather than a flower Allowing our love among all to tower I'm glad we made these life changing decesions Allowing our dreams to be more than a mental vision |
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| i really liked this. every single thing it was saying was so sweet. the last line made the entire poem exactly what it was suppose to be. the rhyming made it feel short but i agree with the others about everything else. <bleedingtears> | Posted on 2006-12-24 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ] | This poem is well-written and very in depth. One can understand what point you are trying to put across. The ryhming is wonderful, it does not seemed forced at all. I really liked it. | | Posted on 2006-12-24 00:00:00 | by ImperfectGirl1 | [ Reply to This ] | Beautiful, very well writen and deep. I like this poem because the reader can really feel how you feel about this person. I liked it. | | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ] | |
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