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    dots Submission Name: JerseyLanddots
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    Author: Valle_Siddious
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Dystopia
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 93/94/41
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsJerseyLanddots
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    The rabbit hole seemed much deeper.....
    But am i still breathing?
    Resperation normal......
    Pulse leveling out......
    Pouring the concrete into the molding,
    too bad i'm still trapped inside.
    Is this me....or him?
    Who's glass am i looking through?
    The Garden State, the big mistake....
    Is it in this?
    Or i....in that?
    Can i keep dreaming?
    Or is this really part of me?
    Part of....him?
    Like a fish out oo water, eyes bulging,
    mouth agap.
    Am i on cue to drown in your air?
    Don't underestimate this land of wonder.
    Ponder my life....his life?
    Feeling like a character from a story book.
    Caste away into this everyday silence.
    I remember the plot, the theme, the cast, the climax.
    All here.....,In my mind.
    The doctor tol me that i've lived here
    all my life.
    Easy for him to say....
    He's never been to JerseyLand.




    Submitted on 2006-12-23 17:42:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm telling you, that was a weird dream. And when I saw "1 Missed Call from Jerseyland" I automatically thought, "Oh, that's Jordon!"
    Craziness. But I love this one!!!! It turned out wonderfully!!! ^_^

    Ayane&Mars
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    lmao

    LOVE!!!
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by Ayane | [ Reply to This ]


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