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    dots Submission Name: A writer , nothing moredots
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    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 660
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    dotsA writer , nothing moredots
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    Just a writer
    Nothing more
    Focing the same emotion onto himself
    For the sake of his writing
    No love stories
    Nothing to bring you back to life
    Not one happy thought is written
    sadness,DEPRESSION
    DEATH,suicide
    It's all he can comprehend
    All he really feels
    Everyone says he should stop writing
    He should accept society
    Get a girlfriend he could settle down with
    Eventually start a family and enjoy life
    But he won't
    ...
    Actually he can't
    He's gone to far from sanity
    He's lost his soul
    Soon he'll lose his body..




    Submitted on 2006-12-23 18:44:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I LIKE THIS POEM. OF COURSE ANYBODY WITH PASSION FOR ANYTHING CAN RELATE TO IT. THERE ARE THINGS WE ARE JUST BORN TO DO AND WRITING IS DEFINITELY MINE AND APPARENTLY YOURS!!! THE DOWN SIDE IS IT FEELS LONELY SOMETIME TO UNDERSTAND THINGS THAT THE WHOLE MAY NEVER, YET YOU CAN TURN IT OFF, AND YOU CAN'T IGNORE IT. "WRITERS MUST WRITE"

    GREAT WRITE
    llcollins
    | Posted on 2008-09-21 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]
      how can anyone tell a writer to stop writing? thats madness.
    many will relate to this, i know i do. i feel i have to force emotions out, just to get something written.
    i enjoyed this, a little of us all in this piece, i think.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2007-01-02 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      this was incredible.
    it was so strong.
    at first i was thinking it was ok but right when i finished it,
    it completely changed my mind.
    i think a good number of people can relate to this piece.
    it didn't have much to it, but you pulled it off.
    keep writing.


    <bleedingtears>
    | Posted on 2006-12-24 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. This is very powerful. I can see what you are getting at, plus i feel your pain. You talk as though al things in your life lead you down into a pit away from the happy things in life that all others see and they wonder why you always seem to fall and to write about it. I know for me whe i fall i write to relive the feelings and thats what this reminded me of. It felt like when everyone teels you to jsut be happy and you jsut cant becouse more and more keep bogging you down. This is so strong and so easy for me to understand, as well as most writters i would believe. Great work keep it up!
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by FLHgg | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a very deep poem. I love how you bolded the words to really emphasize how you feel. Well done.
    | Posted on 2006-12-23 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]


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