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    dots Submission Name: Flowers don't grow in Dirtdots
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    Author: Ygi
    ASL Info:    17/m
    Elite Ratio:    5.55 - 290/149/165
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFlowers don't grow in Dirtdots
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    Sometimes I wish this globe wasn't so tight
    I feel that this world is all I'll see
    and honestly I feel that, that
    really scares me

    If the flowers could grow in
    to my arms-
    I think I'd like that

    If the flowers could grow in my
    I don't, think so
    flowers need love to live in, I
    do think so

    Sometimes I wish this world could breathe
    and accept everyone it sees
    Sometimes I remember
    that takes, all the fun
    out of it

    I wish you could live off of skin
    and see this world, is just made out of dirt
    they want to grow you in




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