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    dots Submission Name: all it takes to fall in lovedots
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    Author: social circus
    ASL Info:    16/M/LA
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 17/57/36
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsall it takes to fall in lovedots
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    all it takes is one kiss and just one touch
    to fall in love forever

    all it takes is three little words and one moment
    to fall in love forever

    all it takes is just two hearts and one simple gesture
    to fall in love forever

    all it takes is a beutiful mind and just one thought
    to fall in love forever

    and all it takes is simply you and me
    to fall in love forever




    Submitted on 2006-12-24 04:56:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      AW thats sweet kinda catchy 2.
    Good write hun,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]


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