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    dots Submission Name: It Radiatesdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsIt Radiatesdots
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    The sun paints the world,
    the sky, the ground, the water is all aglow.
    Orange--it radiates through everything,
    and after the light fades,
    technicolor turns to black and white:
    crystal prisms against black velvet.




    Submitted on 2004-01-30 01:21:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it paints a really nice picture in your mind of the sun and how day turns to night. crystal prisms against black velvet was a really complex, imaginative and poetice description of stars in the night sky (or at least thats how i interpreted it). you have a gift for wording things so beautifully intricate

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    kat
    | Posted on 2011-09-04 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
      crystal prisms against black velvet.... that's an image and half, alright. WOW! Surface simplicity.... makes me wonder as to the depth. Your work is often so openly complex... i wonder if there are hidden meanings here.... or if I'm just thinking too much and it's just a nice little piece about the setting sun? Good work either way!<><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      It's a simple poem and simply tells of the setting of the sun... I think... but anyways it's good.
    | Posted on 2004-01-30 00:00:00 | by MzJae | [ Reply to This ]


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