The words used in this were definitely really good in creating the mood of this poem, very dark and sad, and you can almost see and feel everything which is awesome. I almost didn't notice the rhyming at first, which is good because sometimes when things rhyme for me it's kind of distracting and takes away from the quality of the poem. Anyway, this was really good! Although I'm not entirely sure exactly what the sad music is, but that might just be cause I'm not thinking that clearly right now. I did like this a lot!
This sent chills down my spine as I read it. I finished it and read it again just to get a better feel of what was going on. I could picture a girl lying on the floor in her bedroom with a gun in her hand and blood dripping down the wall.