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Vilot Roses Rage


Author: Black-Death
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Vilot Roses Rage



Vilots are.. dead...
roses are... crude...
Days pass by... carring into darkness
Hate rages on... past the love
Darkness over welms... life
Hearts beat... love dies




Submitted on 2006-12-24 18:22:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  great once again... just check the spelling first...
| Posted on 2006-12-27 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]


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