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    dots Submission Name: My eyes don't lie.dots
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    Author: kathleenbrennan
    ASL Info:    18/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.65 - 72/80/66
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    dotsMy eyes don't lie.dots
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    Wrap it up.
    Make it pretty.
    Hide the truth;
    But it's not a secret.
    I know what it is.
    So why do we wrap it?
    We cover it up with paper and bows.
    Let's cover up what lies beneath.
    One last attempt.
    There's no more shock value.
    I'm not surprised.
    You knew the whole time.
    We're not a family.
    And we're not broken.
    I won't remember this.
    Let's fake a memory.
    Let's stage a smile and take a picture to prove it.
    Let's prove we're happy.
    This picture is evidence.
    Look at those smiles.
    But don't look into my eyes.
    They don't lie.




    Submitted on 2006-12-24 22:25:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh WOW!!! I love it! I really like how it ends. Very nice write going my favorites.
    Much love,
    -Jenny


    P.s. I have a couple new ones if you wanta take a look:)
    | Posted on 2006-12-25 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]



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