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    dots Submission Name: Landscapedots
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    Author: azure_warrior
    ASL Info:    42 /m/ in my mind.
    Elite Ratio:    5.43 - 44/43/32
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 738
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 709



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       I'd appreciate any feedback as far as writing advice or anything else. If it sucks, tell me what you would do to make it work, etc.
    Thanks.


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    dotsLandscapedots
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    My heart jumps in protest of my life.
    My blood runs thick this side of life.

    Calling out for love at the silence of life.
    Finding air and emptiness, this farce, my life.

    Willing to change, but nowhere to go in life.
    Waiting for the big change, finding its a lie.

    Based my life on my way.
    Too late to change, soon still I lay.

    How do I know what's best?
    How the hell do I know anything?

    Signs are indecipherable.
    No map as a guide.

    My karma is thick and obscures the future
    from my view,

    Yet I step anew.
    Will I ever find you?





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