Description: A friend gave me a title, and I wrote the poem. I quite like this, the third stanza is my favourite. C/c welcome...
Talking to myself -------------------------------------------
Talking to myself again
I used to listen to my music
Singing softly
Softly...
And when you came
We'd talk
Over the top
Of it
But now I'm starting to doubt
If you listened to me
Hello?
I'm talking to myself again
You know exactly how to
Drive me up the wall
By making me feel like
I'm talking to myself again
Did you ever listen?
Did you ever take any notice?
I'm starting to doubt
And our song plays again
I'm alone
Talking to myself again
Was it ever even our song?
I don't think so anymore
And that rose you gave me,
It's wilted now
The rain is falling outside
It reminds me of you
And those times
Gone
And now you're tormenting me once more
I guess now I'm
Talking to myself again
I don't like being alone
What can I do to make you hear?
Listen to me please I beg
I miss you even though
you have your faults but that's okay
I have them too
We all do I guess
And what I'm trying to say is
I'm tired of this
Will you return?
No more talking to myself again
That's the way it should be
But if you return
Please listen to me
I'll listen to you
But I guess you don't want to
I'm talking to myself again
i agree, this has a nice beat to it... i like how you encompassed the title well into your work, this is very good. you've left me speechless, and so i have comments to give. -dandan
Submission Name: Talking to myself
