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Your Body Next To Mine

Author: sravenlyn
ASL Info:    17/f/NJ
Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 21 /58 /67
Words: 125
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Your Body Next To Mine

I want your body next to mine
Just relaxing and still with time
My body is getting cold
To keep me warm I need your soul

Fake smiles and faces are around me
But the real face of you is all I see
Your smile makes me grin
Your love is the sweetest sin

Your the devil that has my heart
The discribtion of my love has no start
And your the only thing I think about
Because your the only memory I havent pushed out

Receiving your love is what I live for
And with each sunset I love you more
I wake up in hopes of seeing your face
In my bed will always be your place

Submitted on 2006-12-25 19:20:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is really cute, I think you could do better conveying your thoughts intwertining them with what you want the reader to get out of it.

but all in all not to bad, thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work.
| Posted on 2006-12-26 00:00:00 | by Cannablisjunkie | [ Reply to This ]

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